Ah just back from holiday & I missed these Wez. Indeed piss poor, but then they look exactly like my first swirl.
The thing I like about swirls is they are so random, some like, some I hate. I remember when they first came out & the only ones I had ever seen were Vai's main guitars that he got photographed with in the guitar mags back in late 80 early 90's. No internet back then & no way to see the hundreds of others Ibanez produced.
Fast forward 15 years & the internet is up and running & I discover Jemsite & find all these amazing swirl guitars. Most of the aftermarket ones at that time were done by Herc Fede who had really perfected the clean style & without realising I saw pics of the original ATD ones & thought a lot of them were horrible messy things, not to mention the Jap MKR Universes that had better swirl patterns (to me) but nasty non neon colours. Whats all this rambling about, don't know really but probably the best advice swirling is - do you like the look of it before you dip your guitar into it, pattern, colour, paint thickness etc
Keep at it, its great fun & incredibly messy, I remember trying to swirl a bike helmet - it looked like crap, but the swirling on the whole of my hand was amazing.