I'll attempt to be gentle.
1. It sounds like wanking over the jam section of Skynard's Freebird.
2. What was it recorded in? There's a lot of noise that could easily be removed, intro hums, string movement..etc.
3. There is no mix, it was almost painful to listen to. Rhythm guitar is way too loud, drums too soft.
From the sounds of it, it's likely you don't have the greatest of tools in the world to work with but there was a lot that could have been done to improve it before publishing it to the world.
I'm not trying to discourage you, just being honest without being brutal.
Keep at it...